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Chapter 1: Awkward visitors 3

27th May 2013, 12:42 AM

Chapter 1: Awkward visitors 3
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Rocío Vega on 27th May 2013, 12:42 AM

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Last strip in a row of four that we're uploading today. Check the others!



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Malice on 31st May 2013, 4:55 PM

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So many new pages in one day! These were fun to read :) I did notice some typos on the first page of The First Interlude, though - just thought I should let you guys know in case you hadn't noticed! <3

Rocío Vega on 1st Jun 2013, 4:41 PM

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Typos? Like what? If they were grammar/vocabulary issues, that is due to our bad English :P We double check and an English Major friend helps correcting, but one or two can always get in the way.

Malice on 4th Jun 2013, 2:29 AM

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Let's see.. I had a look again, and any others are hiding from me, but "not longer needed them." should say "no longer needed them" :) Otherwise, for people who claim to have bad English, your English is better than most people's!

Mallister on 10th Jun 2013, 11:50 PM

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Thank you very much for your help! We will change it as soon as possible =D
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